For all teenagers out there. What do you think of my writing?

As a writer and English major, honestly, it was awful. You should never, ever, say "but you might ask" or "i will tell you" or the like UNLESS you are going for a Harlan Coben-esque talking-to-the-reader style. Even if you were, this can only be done after years of experience and establishing oneself as a writer. Also, I see where you tried for imagery, but it was futile. Nothing that the father says sounds believable, it sounds made-up and fake. If this sounds harsh, I am sorry, but constructive criticism is part of being a writer. Keep trying! :)